*glows all over the place*
Your comments kill me. I'm going to blather at you now, okay? Just a warning.
I'm not generally one for dream sequences, but that alone was enough to sell me on this one.
Me neither, to be honest - I really dithered over that one, but in the end I just knew the allure of giving Franziska a whacked-out morphine!nightmare was too great for me to resist :3 Plus, I wanted to find some way of addressing the court case that never was, as I think it would be on her mind a lot at this point. I'm glad to hear it wasn't too cheesy :)
And the bits with the Feys offered some much needed levity. I was actually laughing out loud at the mortal peril bit, because it is so. true. And the part where she was lamenting her losses to a man who plays Hungry Hungry Hippos on his lunch break. And the imagery of Phoenix playing Hungry Hungry Hippos on his lunch break.
It's such a relief to hear you say that <3 I really wanted to give Franziska some point of emotional connection with someone outside of Miles and Adrian - because obviously, Adrian's out of commission, and Miles is off doing his thing (plus, you know, he's Miles and she's Franziska and they don't do that shit unless pushed) - but I was pretty anxious about the whole thing being massively jarring in context with the rest of the fic.
So... I guess I'm just trying to say that it really is wonderful to hear that you liked it, heh. Thank you ♥ I'm still painfully new to writing like this, so your feedback really is invaluable.
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