I just love this chapter. It's moving, and adorably cute and hilarious, all in one.
And I'm so happy that you're getting the love for this that you deserve :)
Fabulous work, and I'm very proud to have been able to help, even if it's only to provide hand-holding and the occasional overly pedantic suggestion :)
<3

(Did you see Doctor Who, by the way? It was awesome :))