Way to go Adrian! Damn, those whip lessons paid off after all. And we thought they were just for the bedroom.

I was pretty excited to see that not only had Adrian gotten away from Matt, but she had gotten away completely on her own, against all odds. Though I would've been happy to see her get away alive through any means possible, it's just that much better knowing that it was Adrian and her awesomeness/quick thinking that saved her life.

And Matt, FYI, it is never cool to try and make people hang themselves with possessions of their significant others. Especially when the "people" is Adrian and the "possessions of their significant others" is Franziska's whip. But then, there's a small part of me that just kind of looks at him in this fic and goes "what an excellent villain, I could almost like him". His motivation behind the whole fake suicide plan and his "whatever it takes" mentality towards it is just...so convincing. He feels very desperate, like this is going to be the last thing he does before he's gone for good, and that is exactly the sort of feeling I'd be expect from him right now. Your villainous Matt=A++.

And then there's that whole thing about you being really awesome at writing the other characters, too. Which I could go on about, but this comment is getting long and rambly enough as it is.

But, before I go, I was wondering...what was up with Adrian’s drugging? She’s kind of succumbing to the drugs in some parts, but then she’s also lucid enough to write the letter Matt’s telling her to write. And think up her brilliant plan to escape. I’m thinking that it’s adrenaline, combating the effects of the drugs enough or her to do all of this, but...I don’t know. I know nothing about drugging people so maybe this is just me being nitpicky about things. But if it was adrenaline, then when it ran out...well. We’ll have to see.

And Adrian, please find the car! Don’t forget that there’s a vehicle! Especially because, um, Matt could maybe get to it and chase you down and oh no. D:

(And, just to wrap up this TL;DR comment:

You can't blame me because Celeste - because you - lost the game.

Inappropriate for this situation as it may be, my first thought when I read that was "I JUST LOST THE GAME".)